Question

在日常生活中我們都會遇到壓力，尤其是初三學生。你是如何排解壓力的呢？請以“How to reduce the pressure ” 為題，寫一篇80詞左右的文章，闡述自己的觀點。

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你遇到的壓力（pressure）是什么？（如作業多、考試成績不理想等）

你是如何減輕（reduce）壓力的呢？(如聽音樂、看電影、鍛煉身體等)

How to reduce the pressure

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                         

 

Answer 1

【答案】

How to reduce the pressure

Now ,we are under too much pressure, it's very important to reduce the pressure.

I have too much pressure. For example ,1 have too much homework. I stay up doing homework every day. I feel very tired. I try my best to study, but I still can't have good grades. I'm always sad.

I always reduce the pressure by sleeping. After I wake up, I will forget all my problems. I'll get happy, I also listen to music to reduce the pressure. It's helpful for me, too. Sometimes, I reduce the pressure by watching TV.

Even if we are under too much pressure, we should face them happily.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己如何排解壓力。本題所給材料比較簡單，需要自己圍繞材料適當發揮。在寫作時要注意時態，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規范性,注意應用所給單詞，短語。結合材料可知本文主要是一般將來時態，第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，序數詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，、條理清楚，符合邏輯關系。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態；分析內容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。