Question

在英語(yǔ)課上，同學(xué)們就是否該做兼職展開了討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，向同學(xué)匯報(bào)討論結(jié)果，并談?wù)勛约旱南敕ā?br />

同意	獲得更多零花錢 更能理解父母 有利于培養(yǎng)興趣愛好
反對(duì)	不安全 學(xué)生應(yīng)專心學(xué)習(xí) 工作是父母的責(zé)任
你的觀點(diǎn)	…

注意  1. 發(fā)言稿必須包括表中所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；
2. 開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)），你只需接著寫；
3．文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；
4. 詞數(shù)：80—110.
參考詞匯: 兼職part-time job; 零花錢pocket money; 責(zé)任duty; 獨(dú)立的independent; 培養(yǎng) develop
Recently we have discussed if middle school students should have a part-time job . Some students think
                                                                 
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Thank you!

Answer 1

Recently we have discussed if middle school students should have a part-time job. Some students think that getting a part-time job could not only develop our sense of duty but also help us earn some pocket money. Also, it could make us more independent. But others believe that as middle school student, our main task is to learn knowledge, so we shouldn’t spend much time doing other things, such as doing part-time jobs. I wonder what you think of this problem ? Thank you!

試題分析：1、這是一篇話題作文。要求根據(jù)提示詞圍繞是否應(yīng)該做兼職的話題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。2、注意動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)地運(yùn)用。談倫個(gè)人的看法可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。提建議時(shí)意識(shí)用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should等，3、次數(shù)在80-110，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名等相關(guān)信息。4、在寫作時(shí)可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但一定不能脫離主題。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】該文中使用了not only…but also、spend…doing sth等句型，為文章增色不少。在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)當(dāng)中，就一定要養(yǎng)成背誦短語(yǔ)、句型的好習(xí)慣。寫起來(lái)就可做到靈活自如。