Question

最近“What’s your dream?”成為一個熱門話題，我們祖國正在為實現(xiàn)自己的夢想而努力，那么你的夢想是什么，請你談?wù)勀愕膲粝搿８鶕?jù)提示寫一篇不少于100詞的文章。
Notes: 1. What’s your dream?
2. Why do you have this dream?
3. What will you do to realize your dream?

Answer 1

My dream
Different people have different dreams.My dream is to be a basketball player.I play basketball every day and I play it very well.I often play basketball with my friends in the playground after school .We often talk about basketball news and watch basketball matches on TV after class. I love Yaoming very much .He is my favourite basketball player.He plays it very well.He plays it not only for his team but also for our country. If I am a basketball player as Yaoming ,I can travel all over the world and play for our country.I hope my dream will come true one day.

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文所給材料要點簡明扼要，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真挖掘材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，主語是第一人稱，寫作中要注意主謂一致問題，適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文多使用簡單句，要點全面。同時借助一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: Different people have different dreams不同的人有不同的夢想，not only---but also---不但---而且---，I hope---我希望---，come true實現(xiàn)等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意積，,牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更有條理性。