Question

假如你有一只寵物狗Dongdong.請根據下表介紹一下你的寵物狗。

年齡	性格	作息時間	能力	關系
2	聰明，友好， 但有時懶惰	6：20起床 8:45睡覺	會立著行走 會跳舞 會和我一起看電影	放學回家時它跟我玩，當我有空時，去遛狗

I have a pet dog. Its name is Dongdong.____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have a pet dog. Its name is Dong.dong. It’s two. It is friendly and smart. But sometimes it is kind of lazy. It gets up at six twenty and goes to bed at a quarter to nine. It can walk on two legs. It can dance. It can also watch TV with me. When I get home from school, it plays with me. When I am free, I take a walk with my pet dog. We are good friends.

【解析】

試題分析：本文的寫作重在對所列信息的表達到位。首先用簡單的句式表達它的名詞，年齡，說明它是友好的、聰明的Its name is Dongdong. It’s two. It is friendly and smart.有時它有點懶sometimes it is kind of lazy.起床用gets up表達，在8:45睡覺用goes to bed at a quarter to nine.表達。然后表達它能直立行走walk on two legs，會跳舞can dance和我一起看電影watch movies with me.與我玩耍it plays with me，去遛狗take a walk with my pet dog.最后總結我們是好朋友We are good friends.

考點：提綱類寫作

點評：本文難度不大，寫作條理性要把握好，對于初一的作文，不要求有很華美的詞語，重在培養自己連詞成句的能力，避免中式英文。在平時的練習中要多去背誦范文，對表達好的句子，短語要進行積累，并默寫，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無患。