Question

書面表達(dá)（1題，滿分10分）
某英語報(bào)社以“China Dream, My Dream”為題，開展征文活動(dòng)，請根據(jù)以下提示和要求用英語寫一篇短文。
提示：1. 談?wù)勀愕膲粝爰捌淅碛桑?to be, because)
2. 如何才能實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢想；(achieve, work hard)
3. 只要每個(gè)人為夢想去努力，中國夢就能實(shí)現(xiàn)。(if, realize)
注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；
3. 詞數(shù)80左右。文章的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
China Dream, My Dream
Everyone has his own dream. My dream is _____________________________________
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Answer 1

Everyone has his own dream. My dream is to be a writer when I grow up. Writing has been part of my life. Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others.
I can achieve my dream by reading widely and working hard at school to learn as much knowledge as possible. At the same time, it’s important to find out the way successful people take so that I can learn from them. I believe that where there is a will, there is a way. And I make up my mind to hold on to my dream till one day it comes true.
One’s personal dream is a part of China dream. As we know, the more people, the more strength. If everyone makes great effort, it will be easier to realize our China dream.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，I can achieve my dream by reading widely and working hard at school to learn as much knowledge as possible, I make up my mind to hold on to my dream till one day it come true.可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。At the same time如等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。