Question

假如你們班明天下午召開一次關于英語學習方法交流的班會。請你以How do I learn English?為話題，根據下面的提示寫一篇簡短的發言稿。要求: 70詞左右(開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數)。
提示：1. 加入英語俱樂部；  2. 常去英語角； 3. 每天早晨早起記單詞； 4. 常做聽力練習；  5. 收看英語節目。
Good afternoon, everyone!
It’s an honor to talk with all of you here.                                                                                
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

Good afternoon, everyone!
It’s an honor to talk with all of you here. I want to give you some advice on how to learn English well. In order to improve my English, I joined an English club. And I often go to the English corner and talk with others in English. I usually remember new words as soon as I get up every morning. I often follow the tapes to do some listening practice. In my spare time, I often watch some English programs on TV. I have made some progress this term, and do you want to have a try?
That’s all. Thank you!

試題分析：本文的寫作注意條理性的把握，將文章的要點要進行全面的說明。首先表達自己為了學好英語而加入了英語俱樂部I joined an English club.常去英語角和別人用英語交流go to the English corner and talk with others in English.每天早晨早起記單詞可以用as soon as句型來表達“一…就”，句式上顯得緊湊，活潑。然后說明自己常做聽力練習do some listening practice.收看英語節目I often watch some English programs on TV.最后呼吁大家也試試這些方法，并且自己已經取得了一些成功do you want to have a try.
點評：初中英語的作文，出考察學生連詞成句的能力外，還要求學生能夠變換句式，學會用不同的表達，來表達同一個意思，要在“準”字和“美”上下功夫。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數關系和動詞時態等諸多方面，同時要學會多用副詞來修飾謂語動詞，這樣顯示出深厚的語言根底。對于初三的作文，在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進行默寫，考試時就能寫出準確地道的作文。