Question

為了使同學們更加健康地成長，學校決定向同學們征求建議。假設你叫張立，用英語向校長寫一封80個詞左右的建議信。所寫內容必須包括表格中你對學校和老師的建議,并適當說明理由。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
our school  our teachers   Suggestions for a Better School Life
1. open the library more often
2. organize more after-class activities
3. give us longer vacations
Dear Headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions.____________________________________                  
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Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Li

Answer 1

Dear Headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have
a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First , I hope our school
will open the library more often. Reading more books can help us open up our eyes
to the outside world. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class
activities. And I think we should be allowed to have longer vacations because we
need more time to do things like volunteering.
As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes moreinteresting.
And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested
in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give
us less homework and finish class on time.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Li

本題是寫一篇給定材料的建議信，書寫時，應注意建議信的格式和書信的格式相似，
信結尾寫上祝愿語和寫信人，信的主要內容為談論如何有一個更好的校園生活，給老師提出
的建議和要求，給學校提出的建議和要求，寫作時應注意一般現在時和一般將來時的合理使
用，條件狀語從句，賓語從句等多種句式的使用，同時要注意語言的準確性和連貫性。