Question

根據(jù)提示，請(qǐng)以“ School Rules”為題， 寫(xiě)一篇短文：每所，學(xué)校都有規(guī)章制度 。下面是你們學(xué)校的一些規(guī)章制度，請(qǐng)你向一位新生Mary作一下介紹。內(nèi)容包括：
1. 上課不能遲到。
2. 教室要保持(keep)干凈和安靜。
3. 見(jiàn)到老師要問(wèn)好。（greet)
4. 不允許在教室里吃東西。
5. 不許在課堂上聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，玩游戲。
6. 不要損害花草樹(shù)木。（pick flowers; climb trees）
要求：意思連貫、語(yǔ)句通順。70詞左右。
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    

Answer 1

School Rules
　　  Welcome to our school, Mary. Here are some  of  our school rules. Let me tell you: We can't arrive late for class. We can't talk loudly in class. We have to be quiet in class, and we have to keep our class clean. When we meet the teachers on the way, we must greet them. We can't eat or drink in the classroom. But we can eat outside. We can't listen to music or play games in class, either. We can't pick flowers or climb trees.  

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，向一位新生Mary介紹學(xué)校的規(guī)章制度。題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。為了使語(yǔ)言更顯親切,在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，本文的主語(yǔ)主要是用復(fù)數(shù)第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài). 注意時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)與時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫,適當(dāng)使用連詞。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類(lèi)作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿(mǎn)意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。