Question

書面表達

《21^st Century》報正在舉行“My friendship with ________”的征文比賽，請你寫一篇短文參賽，首先介紹一下你好朋友的基本信息，然后記敘一件反映你們之間友誼的小事，并談談此事對你的影響。

注意事項：

1、詞數不少于60詞；

2、文中不得出現真實的校名和姓名。

參考詞匯：tall, hair, bright, friendly, smile, help, best,…

My friendship with ________

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Answer 1

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解析：

One possible version： My friendship with Mary 　　In our lives, we may have many friends．And good friends really mean a lot to us． 　　I have a friend named Mary．She is 12 years old．We are in the same class．She is tall with big black eyes．When we talk about something, she always looks at me, smiling． 　　Two years ago, I came to this small town with my parents because my father found a new job here．Everything seemed strange to me when I went to my new school on the first day．I felt very lonely．Just then, Mary came to me．She invited me to play games with her, and we went home together after school．What’s more, she often helped me with my poor English．With her help, I made great progress．Can you believe it? Now, I can communicate with foreigners! 　　Mary was so kind and helpful and we became good friends soon．It was Mary who gave me the greatest help when I was new here．A friend in need is a friend indeed．That is really true． 　　書面表達評分標準： 　　第一檔：(13～15分) 　　完全符合題目要求，表達思想清楚且積極向上，內容豐富。使用多種句型結構和豐富的詞匯，語言通順，語意連貫，具有邏輯性。 　　第二檔：(9～12分) 　　基本符合題目要求，表達思想基本清楚，內容完整。語法結構和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語言基本通順，語意基本連貫。有少量語言錯誤，但不影響整體理解。 　　第三檔：(5～8分) 　　部分內容符合題目要求，表達思想不夠清楚，內容不夠完整。語法結構和詞匯錯誤較多，語言不通順，影響整體理解。 　　第四檔：(0～4分)