Question

初中階段的學習生活即將結束，在離校之前，同學們討論怎樣做一件有意義的事。請根
據表中信息寫一篇英語短文，為某英語報舉辦的征文比賽投稿。

有的同學建議	給學校買禮物，感謝母校老師
另外一些同學建議	用零花錢給災區和貧困地區的學生買學習用品
你的建議及感想	……

注意：詞數為80-100詞。 短文開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數。
提示用語：災區：disaster areas
We’ll leave school soon. Now my classmates are discussing how to do a meaningful thing before leaving school.
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Answer 1

One possible version:
We’ll leave school soon. Now my classmates are discussing how to do a meaningful thing before leaving school. Some students think we should buy a proper gift for our school and thank the teachers for helping and taking care of us. Others think we should buy pencils, pens , notebooks, schoolbags and some other school things for the children in the disaster areas and poor areas.
I think we can …
As students, we should thank those who help us. We should help those in need and do a bit for our society.

解析試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動筆前應根據材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態，關鍵單詞等問題。寫作中注意將同學們的建議介紹清楚，并介紹自己的建議及感想，不要遺漏要點。寫作中注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
考點：應用文寫作
點評：此類作為首先要做的就是認真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數。另外為了應付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應考時就會有法可依。