Question

假如你們學(xué)校要開(kāi)展“創(chuàng)建和諧校園（to build a harmonious campus）”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇倡議書(shū)，號(hào)召大家為創(chuàng)建和諧校園而努力。要求：80詞左右（短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
提示：1、努力學(xué)習(xí)，參加課外活動(dòng)；2、友愛(ài)互助，尊敬師長(zhǎng)；3、愛(ài)護(hù)花草樹(shù)木，不隨地亂扔廢棄物。
Our school is like our home. We should try to build up a harmonious campus.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

Answer 1

One possible version:
Our school is like our home. We should try to build up a harmonious campus.
First of all, the students in our school should work hard at our lessons. After school, we’d better take an active part in all kinds of activities to help improve our health and study.
Then we should be friendly to one another. We should respect our teachers and get on well with our classmates.
Thirdly, it is our duty to keep the school yard clean and tidy. We shouldn’t throw wastes around or pick flowers.
Please do our best to make our school beautiful.

這是一篇命題作文，就創(chuàng)建和諧校園，寫(xiě)一封倡議書(shū)。寫(xiě)作中注意不能遺漏提示中的要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。