Question

七歲的女孩Mary來自美國,在日常生活中，她喜歡聽音樂，喜歡去動物園。她家里有一臺電腦，她通常在周六玩電腦游戲。她的媽媽每天都會在網(wǎng)上搜索信息,，有時還進行網(wǎng)上購物。她的爸爸喜歡在網(wǎng)上看足球比賽，還經(jīng)常在電腦上玩游戲。請根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇短文介紹她及其家人。
要求：
1. 條理清楚、意思連貫、語句通順、標點正確。
2. 至少60詞。

Answer 1

Mary is seven years old. She is from America. She likes listening to music and going to the zoo. There is a computer in her home. Mary usually plays computer games on Saturday. Her mother goes on the Internet every day. She usually searches for information and sometimes she goes shopping on it. Her father likes watching football matches on the Internet and he often plays games on it.

解析試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點說明】范文中用了一些常見短語：be from來自某處；  like doing喜歡做某事；  listen to 聽；search for 尋找；go shopping購物。She likes listening to music and going to the zoo這個句子中and連接兩個并列的動詞，形式保持一致。Her father likes watching football matches on the Internet and he often plays games on it這個句子中and連接兩個句子，時態(tài)保持一致。
考點： 提綱類作文。