Question

請以 “My School Life” 為題寫一篇70詞的英語短文。要點如下：
1.學校大而且漂亮，有三棟大樓，一個圖書館，里面藏書很多。
2.上午9:00開始上課，下午4:30結束。
3.我們不需早起，有大量時間從事課外活動。每天只有半小時作業。
4.我們的課程有語文，數學，地理，電腦等，我最喜歡。。。，因為。。。
5.我們有許多興趣小組和課外活動。在班上我參加的俱樂部最多。
我們總是玩得開心。

Answer 1

My School Life
I love my school very much. It's very big and beautiful. there are three buildings and a library with a lot of books in it .We have lessons from 9:00 a.m to 4:00 p.m.
Every day we only need to spend about half an hour doing my homework so we have enough time to take part in after-school activities. We  also have many interest groups . I took part in the clubs most in the class. best of all ,we needn’t get up early.
We have many subjects,such as Chinese, math, geography, computer and so on.My favourite subject is Chinese .because l learn a lot from our chinses teacher.she is popular with us .
We always have fun in my school.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料非常詳細，一共五個要點。主要介紹學校的環境，作息，活動等。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第一人稱，注意時態與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少。如: a library with a lot of books ，enough time to take part in，took part in，best of all，and so on，is popular with等。有等學習中注意總結,靈活運用。同時連詞的運用也使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.