Question

臨近畢業，我相信你一定有不再穿的衣服，看過的舊書，用過的書包，留著占地方，扔了又可惜。你是否想過把這些東西捐贈出來，讓需要的人帶回家，既能傳遞幸福，也能收獲一份驚喜。近日，某英文網站提出“愛心助學”的倡議，請你就 “Give Away Something, Pass on Happiness”為話題，就此向全校學生發出倡議。

要點提示：

臨近畢業，會有很多閑置物品，留著占地方，扔了又可惜；

不要扔掉，收拾好，捐給需要的人；

讓需要的人帶回家，傳遞幸福的同時，也能收獲一份驚喜。

要求：

用詞恰當，要點全面，層次清晰，書寫規范；

可適當發揮，詞數：80詞左右。

不得出現自己真實姓名和學校等相關信息。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Give Away Something, Pass on Happiness

Now, we’ll graduate from school. Everyone must have a lot of things we don’t use in future. If we throw them, we will feel a little cad. But if we keep them, they will take up a lot of space. How to deal with them is a problem.

There is a good way to deal with the problem. Give those to somebody who needs them. If not only helps yourself but also helps others. When people use these things, they might feel happy. And I think you will feel happy, too.

Give away something, pass on happiness .We can do a lot of others. In this way, we can make a difference. Do you like my idea? Why not have a try?

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。運用適當的短語表達中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時也要符合事實。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：提綱作文。