Question

根據下面表格的內容的提示，以 “Changes in my hometown” 為題，用英語寫一篇100字左右的短文。

	過去	現在
環境	道路臟，狹小，到處是垃圾 有大塊的空地	道路寬闊干凈、路邊綠樹成蔭 有商店和高樓大廈
生活	矮小的房子 收音機、電視	新公寓 電腦、網絡和手機
交通	步行、騎車	公交車、出租車、私家車
你的觀點	……

Changes in my hometown

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Answer 1

Changes in My Hometown

      In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The transportation was not convenient, so few visitors came here.

     Great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become much better. The mountains have turned greener. The rivers are clearer and the sky is bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars.

Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city. I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。寫出順序的詞來表達文意更清楚。完成提示詞時也要符合事實。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文進行了較為全面的說明，從對家鄉的過去開始描述，然后轉入對家鄉現在的情況介紹，通過對以往的面貌與現在面貌進行對比，體現出如今人們生活的幸福與快樂。同時使用了一些固定句式和短語，如：take place發生；turn greener變得更綠；large and bright大而明亮等等為文章增色不少。使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：提綱作文。