Question

假如你叫李華，你的美國筆友 Annie打算暑假來你市旅游，她想了解一下你市東方海灘的情況。請你根據以下信息，給她寫一封80-100 詞的e-mail，開頭和結尾已給出（不計入總詞數）。

名稱	東方海灘
位置	城東10公里
特點	世界最好的海灘之一，沙細，水凈，浪小
最適合的運動	游泳，沙灘排球
公用設施	洗手間，更衣室，商店
交通條件	有多路去海灘的公交車，出租車隨時乘坐

參考詞語：
1． East Beach   東方海灘                        2.fine   adj. (  沙) 細的
3.  be suitable       適合的 …                    4. dressing room  n. 更衣室，
Dear Annie,
I’m very glad to hear that you’ll travel to my city.                                   
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                                    

Answer 1

Dear Annie,
I’m very glad to hear that you’ll travel to my city. Now let me tell you something about the East Beach.
The East Beach is in the east of my city, 10 kilometres away. It’s one of the best beaches in the world. The sand there is fine, soft and clean. The water is clear with small waves. It’s suitable for swimming and playing volleyball.
You can get to the beach easily. Many buses can take you there. You can also take a taxi at any time. There are toilets, dressing rooms and shops. I think you will have a great time there.
I’m looking forward to your coming.

試題分析：本文是材料作文。所要描述的內容已經給列出了。學生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的。考生在寫作之前要認真審題。首先要注意文章的時態，這是對東方海灘的描述，所以用一般現在時即可但對于過去發生的一些事情，也會出現一般過去時，注意時態的轉換。因為是給友人介紹，所以用第一人稱。再者禁止逐句翻譯。注意連詞的應用，銜接到各個知識點，以提高作文檔次和點亮文章亮點。
【亮點說明】本文出現一些常見的短語，be suitable for,適合,take sb to someplace,帶某人去某處，take a taxi,乘出租車，have a good time玩得愉快。It’s one of the best beaches in the world句子中出現one of 名詞復數，in the world 所以會出現最高級。You can get to the beach easily你很容易到達，easily用來修飾get to 。I think you will have a great time there，這句話中提到賓語從句。文中還出現一些高級詞匯如clean，suitable，fine,wave，提高文章的檔次。