Question

假設你是某國際學校廣播站成員，請根據以下要點用英文擬寫一份關于預防H7N9流感的通知。
1. 勤洗手；
2. 一旦感冒，馬上就醫；
3. 病的較重的同學，建議在家休息直到醫生說可以回校；
4. 你的一、兩個建議。
【寫作要求】
1. 文章的開頭與結尾已給出不計入詞數；
2. 文章需包含要點的所有內容，字數120詞左右。
【評分標準】
句子結構精準、信息內容完整、篇章結構整潔。
Announcement
Hello everyone. Here are some recommendations for keeping yourself healthy during H7N9 outbreak.
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May everybody be healthy and enjoy your study. That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

Announcement
Hello everyone. Here is some recommendations for keeping yourself healthy during H7N9 outbreak.The most basic thing you should do is wash your hands frequently so as to reduce the chance to get infected. If any of you have caught a cold, you should go and see a doctor as soon as possible. For those with serious illness, we suggest you stay at home and rest until the doctor tells you it’s safe to return to school. Then you’d better clean the surface of your desks and chairs at least daily. Do remember to open the doors and windows to let in enough fresh air even on cold winter days. Also, fruit and vegetables, as well as sports will surely do you good.
May everybody be healthy and enjoy your study. That’s all. Thank you.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，所給要點清晰，要求明確，話題內容貼近社會熱點，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真審題，勾勒要點，并適當發揮。行文中要注意人稱、時態的變化及主謂一致問題。同時注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文能夠根據寫作提示，較好地把與寫作相關的內容進行歸納整合，內容覆蓋所有要點，語言表達準確，考生有較大的發揮空間；同時靈活使用復雜句式，使文章自然流暢。文章中還使用了一些常用的句式和短語，這為文章增色不少。在學習中注意加強練筆，掌握一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。