Question

假如你叫劉英，剛度假回來(lái)。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)信給你的美國(guó)筆友Jack，介紹你的北京7日游活動(dòng)。字?jǐn)?shù)要求：80字左右。

7—day Beijing Tour Things to see and do visit the Palace Museum and Tian’ anmen Square take a Hutong Tour and have Beijing roast duck in Quanjude climb the Great Wall visit the Summer Palace 5.  go shopping in Wangfujin street Weather    Hot and rainy

Dear Jack,

                                                               

                                                     Yours,

                                                 Liu Ying

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Jack,  

 I’m so glad to learn that you will come to Beijing . I have planned a seven-day trip for you.

 I’m going to show you to visit the Palace Museum and Tian’ anmen Square. We can take a walk and enjoy the beautiful views there. And I will be on a visit to Beijing hutong, which have a long history .  If the weather is fine, we will climb the Great Wall , where we can overlook the views. The summer place is a good place to visit because it belonged to the emperor. I will take you to have Beijing roast duck in Quanjude, which is well-known to all.  Besides, we can do some shopping in the wangfujing street. 

  Are you pleased with my plan? I hope you will have a wonderful time in Beijing .

   Looking forward to meeting you ！

                                                                        Yours

                                                                               Liu Ying

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)給出一定的文字提示，比較容易寫(xiě)。但是在寫(xiě)作上一定要注意審題，不要跑題或者偏題。要按要點(diǎn)來(lái)完成寫(xiě)作任務(wù)，但不能生硬的寫(xiě)幾個(gè)句子交待了事，切記，逐條生硬的翻譯，沒(méi)有任何的連接詞。注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)進(jìn)行敘述，第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)進(jìn)來(lái)寫(xiě)作，可以加入個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)，不可喧賓奪主。在詞匯的運(yùn)用上，除了用自己熟悉的句型與詞匯外，注意句型的變化，連詞的使用使詞義連貫流暢，同時(shí)也使得文章有層次感，有條理性。注意高級(jí)句型的運(yùn)用提升文章的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文出現(xiàn)一些常見(jiàn)短語(yǔ)，如be on a visit to 參觀,be pleased with ,對(duì)…… 感到滿意，have a good time,玩得愉快，look forward t o doing盼望做某事。Be well-known to sb ,眾所周知。I will take you to have Beijing roast duck in Quanjude, which is well-known to all. 這句話中出現(xiàn)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。本文還出現(xiàn)比較好的連詞，如：if,because,besides 使文章前后連貫順暢。

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