Question

根據(jù)圖片和提示詞, 以My Home為題寫一篇短文。(80詞左右)，
提示詞：nice, three bedrooms,a study, a big garden, a kitchen
many flowers, play, love等
My Home
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

My Home
I have a two-floor house.  It is very nice both inside and outside.  There are three bedrooms in it. The smallest one is a study room, while the other two are for me and my parents.  The sitting room is also very large.  The kitchen and toilet room are very clean. There is a big garden in front of the house, and there are many beautiful flowers in it.  My sister and I often play together in the large garden.  I love my big house very much.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)圖片和提示詞, 以My Home為題寫一篇短文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。