Question

請你為學校雜志寫一份廣告，內容要點如下：學校樂隊（the school band）需要四名新成員，分別要求他們能彈鋼琴，彈吉它和敲鼓。你的聯系方式，你的號碼，87563559 你的電子郵箱（e-mail address） butterfly @ xjschool.com.cn。
要求：1.條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標點正確；2.詞數不少于60。
Musicians wanted for the school band
                                                                  
                                                                 
                                                                 
                                                                 
                                                                 

Answer 1

Musicians wanted for the school band
In order to expand the scale of the school band, we want four new members who can play the piano,the guitar or the drum. Anyone that is good at one of these instruments and interested in joining the band can contact me. My teleohone number is 87563559. You can aslo send me the e-mail. My e-mail address is butterfly @ xjschool.com.cn

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，主要以廣告的形式招收樂隊成員，主要用一般現在時。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如In order to,be interested in, be good at ,等短語，文中還用到了定語從句 who can play the piano,the guitar or the drum，that is good at one of these instruments and interested in joining the band.條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標點正確，表達流暢。