Question

為了使同學(xué)們更加健康地成長，學(xué)校決定向同學(xué)們征求建議。假設(shè)你叫張立，用英語向校長寫一封80個詞左右的建議信。所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中你對學(xué)校和老師的建議,并適當(dāng)說明理由。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
our school  our teachers   Suggestions for a Better School Life
1. open the library more often
2. organize more after-class activities
3. give us longer vacations
Dear Headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions.____________________________________                  
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Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Li

Answer 1

Dear Headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have
a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First , I hope our school
will open the library more often. Reading more books can help us open up our eyes
to the outside world. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class
activities. And I think we should be allowed to have longer vacations because we
need more time to do things like volunteering.
As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes moreinteresting.
And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested
in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give
us less homework and finish class on time.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Li

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