Question

Jim 在英語考試中表現不好，很糟糕，又感到孤獨，請寫一封信對他進行開導。內容包括：
①對自己有信心；②別沉默，多與人交流；③更加努力學習；④參加各種活動；⑤笑對生活等
 Dear Jim ,                                                    
      I’m sorry to hear that                                  
                                                               
                                                               
                                                               
                                                               
Yours,
Kangkang

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
I am sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in the last exam and you feel bad now. What I want to say to you now is that this is nothing. You should be confident of yourself. Don’t be silent and try to talk more to people,  Such as your teacher, your classmates and your parents, You many take part in all kinds of activities and it will make you feel relaxed. Besides, go on studying harder and I believe you are sure to make great progress.
Remember that life will smile to you if you smile to life.
Yours,
Kangkang

試題分析：本題要求根據中文提示寫一篇短文，對在英語考試中表現不好，很糟糕，又感到孤獨的Jim進行開導。在寫作時一定要做到，語句通順，合乎邏輯，不遺漏一個要點。
【亮點說明】該文多次使用復合句如What I want to say to you now is that this is nothing. I believe you are sure to make great progress. Remember that life will smile to you if you smile to life.
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