Question

最近網民熱議“中國式過馬路”現象，寧波市開展了以“文明出行，從不闖紅燈做起”為主題的交通安全宣傳月活動。請你根據下圖提示，用英文寫一篇短文，談談作為寧波市民應該如何文明出行。
注意：
1.文中應包含所有要點，并可適當發揮。
2.詞數：80詞左右。開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

As we all know, traffic safety plays an important part in our daily life. But what can we do to keep safe? Here are some suggestions.
As walkers,                                                                  
                                                                               
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                               
If everyone does so, people are sure to enjoy their life better.

Answer 1

As we all know, traffic safety plays an important part in our daily life. But what can we do to keep safe? Here are some suggestions.
As walkers, you should walk at the side of the road. Always remember to walk on the zebra crossing and look left and right carefully before you cross the road. Never try to jump the red light. It’s dangerous. If you drive, you should slow down at the traffic lights. You must always wear a seat belt. Never drive cars after drinking and you shouldn’t use your mobile phones while driving. It may cause serious traffic accidents. While you are waiting for a bus, please stand in line and wait for your turn. Don’t push others. What’s more, give your seat to the people who need it most.
If everyone does so, I think people are sure to enjoy their life better.

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們通過觀察這幅圖來描述一下，在過馬路的時候，我們應該注意哪些事情，怎樣文明過馬路。配合圖畫，還有一些提綱的東西和一些關鍵詞，來幫助我們組織文章。通過審題，我們主要從三個方面來闡述，行人、司機和乘客。同學們要發揮自己的想象力，并結合我們日常生活中的熟悉的一些交通規則來充實文章的內容。本文應主要使用第三人稱，一般現在時。寫作時還要注意行文連貫。
【亮點說明】這篇范文全面的描述了圖畫中的內容，并利用題目中所給的提綱從行人、司機和乘客三個方面進行了闡述，要點全面，內容充實。文章中使用了一些較好的句式和短語，如Always remember to walk on the zebra crossing and look left and right carefully before you cross the road.、If you drive, you should slow down at the traffic lights、Never drive cars after drinking and you shouldn’t use your mobile phones while driving、While you are waiting for a bus, please stand in line and wait for your turn.等。并且文章中一些情態動詞和祈使句的使用為文章增加了力量。