Question

Bill 是我的筆友，他來自日本，現居住在上海。今年14歲。他喜歡中國和中國食物，他最喜歡的是電影和籃球。他的理想是作一名記者。他想去參觀長城(the Great Wall)，他認為那是一個可以玩得很開心的地方。今天天氣晴朗，他和朋友們正在公園里做運動。
請綜合以上信息，以My pen pal 為題寫一篇60字左右的短文。
My pen pal
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Answer 1

I have a pen pal named Bill , who comes from Japan and now lives in Shanghai. He is 14 years old. He likes China and Chinese food. What he likes best is films and basketball.
His dream is to become a reporter. He wants to the Great Wall. He thinks that it’s a good place to have fun. It’s Sunny today and he is doing exercise with his friends in the park. I like her very much!

解析這篇文章主要是就要點翻譯句子，寫作時要注意單詞拼寫、語法、標點、還有時態問題。這題都是一般現在時。另外還要注意主謂一致問題。Bill后面的謂語都是用單數。可以適當的運用些復合句，比如：I have a pen pal named Bill , who comes from Japan and now lives in Shanghai.這是定語從句。What he likes best is films and basketball.這句里有主語從句。