Question

你學校最近開展“美好校園”的系列活動，你參加了“美好校園，從我做起”的演講，請以 “Start out small”為題, 寫一篇演講辭，內容必須包括：
1. 描述圖中校園內的不良行為；
2. 自由發揮，描述其他一至兩點校園內的不良行為;
2. 發表你的校園文明倡議。

注意：1. 詞數80左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入詞數）；
2. 不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。
Start out small
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school…

Answer 1

Start out small
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school. Firstly, in order to save water, we should never forget to turn off the tap after we wash hands or other things. But some of us often forget it. Secondly, we should protect the trees and grass which make our school beautiful. For example, we should follow the rules and not play football on the grass. Besides, don’t liter around. It’s a good habit to put the rubbish into the rubbish can and keep our school clean and tidy. Let’s start out small. Only in this way can we make our school beautiful. So we can study in a beautiful and comfortable environment.

試題分析：這是一篇圖片作文。根據圖片內容和要求，以“美好校園，從我做起”為主題描述一些校園內不文明現象，圖片已經給出我們三點提示，要求我們自己適當發揮，再寫出一條。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，注意時態語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如：in order to“為了”；forget to do sth“忘記做某事”；It’s a good habit to do put the rubbish into the rubbish .“將垃圾扔進垃圾箱是好習慣。”以及倒裝句的使用。學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。