Question

愛是心中的太陽，融化你我身邊的冰雪。假設你是李明，你們學校的 “English Canden”正在辦主題為“付出既是收獲”的征文活動，請你聯系自己平時的愛心行為和感受寫一篇文章投稿。
要求：1、文中不得出現真實的人名和校名等相關信息。
2、 80—100詞。標題和文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

Answer 1

Giving is Receiving
I’m a student from Green Middle School. My name is LI Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up city parks. I go to the old people’s home and do some cleaning for them once a month. So I’m pretty popular there. I often visit the children’s hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I am good with children. I also give money to charities to help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me?

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點中給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發揮的地方較多。動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發揮，確定時態主要詞匯等問題。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。另外，在描述時，應該注意人稱的變化。
點評：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內容發揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。