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書面表達（滿分15分）
為迎接青奧會，我市提出“大干一百天，環境大掃除”的口號。南京陽光中學積極響應，在學生中廣泛征集參與該活動的創意。請根據以下征集到的創意寫一篇倡議書，并提出你自己的一個“金點子”。
創意：
1. 設計保護環境海報；
2. 到公共場所分發宣傳單；
3. 去公園參加公益勞動；
4. ……
要求：
1. 文中不得出現你的真實姓名和學校名稱；
2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規范，可適當發揮；
3. 詞數80左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Working hard for the YOG
The Second Youth Olympic Games are coming up. The government calls on Nanjing citizens to keep the environment around us clean and tidy by working hard.
 
 

Answer 1

Working hard for the YOG
The Second Youth Olympic Games are coming up. The government calls on Nanjing citizens to keep the environment around us clean and tidy by working hard.
As middle school students, we should do something we can to support this activity. First, let’s design some nice posters to let every student know the importance of improving our environment. Then, it’s a good idea to give out leaflets in public places to make sure more and more people can join in this activity. Also, it’s very meaningful to do some voluntary work in a park. Above all, the most important thing is to keep our school and classrooms clean all the time.
I’m sure our city will have a new look to welcome players and guests from all over the world.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來并給出自己的建議。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，注意時態語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如：It’s a good idea to do sth.“做某事是一個好主意。”above all“首要的是”；make sure“確保”以及不定式和復合句的使用。學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。