Question

保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)。請(qǐng)以The Ways to Protect(保護(hù)) Our Environment為題，從如何節(jié)電、節(jié)水、減少污染等方面提出五條建議。
要求：詞數(shù)約30左右。

Answer 1

The Ways to Protect Our Environment
I think it’s our duty to protect the environment around us.  I think we’d better not buy bottles or boxes which people can only use once. We should turn off the lights when we are not using them.We should save water as much as possible. It’s important for us to protect animals and plants. We are supposed to prevent the factory from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and so on. If everyone is doing that, our world will become more and more beautiful.

試題分析：根據(jù)提示讓我們寫保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)的話題作文，根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知句子的時(shí)態(tài)一般用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，文中必須包括提示要求的五條建議。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】短文用了一些短語和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：I think it’s our duty to protect the environment around us. I think we’d better not buy bottles or boxes which people can only use once. We should turn off the lights when we are not using them We are supposed to prevent the factory from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and so on. If everyone is doing that, our world will become more and more beautiful.等，文中用了一些連詞如：that，when，if等，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更加復(fù)雜，顯示了寫作的功底。