Question

人人都有朋友 初中三年同學(xué)之間結(jié)下深厚的友誼。假設(shè)你叫張華，你的筆友李敏在下面這封信中介紹了他的學(xué)友，請(qǐng)你寫一封70 詞左右的回信，說(shuō)說(shuō)你好友的基本情況和興趣愛好。
注意：1、回信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出.但不計(jì)入總詞教：
2、信中請(qǐng)勿使用朋友的真實(shí)校名和姓名
Dear Zhang Hua.
How are you? In this letter I’d like to say something about my best friend.
My best friend is Gao Jun. He is fifteen. He is tall with short hair. We are in the same class.
Gao Jun is smart and friendly in class, he listens to the teachers carefully At home, he often helps his mother with housework He does well in all his lessons. And he is always ready to help others. So, everyone in our class likes him
Gao Jun seems to have a special interest in writing. He wants to be a writer in the future.
Both of us like playing basketball .We usually play it after class. We feel happy when we are together. I think we will be good friends forever.
What about your best friend? Can you tell me something about him( her)?
Yours.
Li Min.
Dear Li Min.
Thank you for telling me so much about your best friend Gao Jun.
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Yours.
Zhang Hua

Answer 1

Dear Li Min.
Thank you for telling me so much about your best friend Gao Jun. Liu Nan is my best friend. She’s sixteen years old. She was born in Guangzhou. She lives with her family in Huaihua. She has black hair and she wears glasses. She is very lovely and pretty.
She loves listening to music. She has many hobbies, such as dancing, running and playing computer games. She wants to be a teacher when she grows up.
We always have fun. We sit under the trees at lunchtime and have a good chat. On Sunday, we usually go to the bookshop. We often study together.
Yours.
Zhang Hua

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封回信。給出的材料主要是一封來(lái)信，故動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀來(lái)信,正確對(duì)來(lái)信內(nèi)容都有所回應(yīng)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。