Question

關于減壓提建議

Answer 1

Now many students are under too much pressure. They always feel too tired to listen to teachers carefully in class.
It’s important for students to relax. Here are some different ways to relax themselves. For example, they can try to have enough sleep, or they can listen to their favorite music after class. They can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often hang out with my friends after school.
While you are studying, don’t forget to relax yourself. In this way, you will be healthy and study better.

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。要求根據許多學生因為壓力過大，談談減壓的幾點建議。
【亮點說明】這篇短文內容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運用恰當，多見好句型和習慣表達用語，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。