Question

本周是學校的“愛護野生動物周”。請你根據下面的材料，為班級板報寫一個關于獅子的80詞左右的簡要介紹。
Appearance: big and strong; grey or yellow fur; sharp teeth
Ability: good at hunting
Lifestyle: live on grassland; don’t often move around; meat-eating animals
Danger: people hunt them for fun and change grassland into grazing land (牧場)

Answer 1

Lions are big and strong animals. They have grey or yellow fur. Their teeth are very sharp. Lions are good at running and hunting other animals. They mainly live on grassland. They are meat-eating animals. They usually look lazy because they don’t move around often.
Now there aren’t many lions in the wild. People sometimes hunt them for fun. And people keep changing grassland into grazing land. They are losing their living areas.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹愛護野生動物---獅子，從獅子的外貌特點到它的特征，以及獅子的生活習性，重點寫到了獅子面臨的狀況，號召人們保護大自然愛護動物。本文所給材料比較詳細，根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第三人稱復數，寫作中適當使用固定詞組，段落清晰，固定句式的使用會給文章增色不少。
【亮點說明】這篇短文內容詳略得當，有很多精彩的短語 如be good at doing , They mainly live on grassland. And people keep changing grassland into grazing land. They are losing their living areas.點明了主題，號召人們要愛護野生動物，突出了文章的主題。