Question

根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。所給的英文提示詞僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的校名和姓名。

74. 生活中我們每天都在與人交往，也許你曾經(jīng)遇到過(guò)這樣的困境：你想在聚會(huì)上穿的衣服

臟了讓媽媽幫你洗，然而媽媽因?yàn)楣ぷ魈�忙沒(méi)有時(shí)間洗；與同學(xué)共同完成墻報(bào)(a wall

newspaper)時(shí)，你有一個(gè)自認(rèn)為很好的想法沒(méi)有被采納；你最近學(xué)習(xí)很忙，但是向你請(qǐng)教問(wèn)

題的同學(xué)很執(zhí)著；…… 你是怎樣做的？

現(xiàn)在，請(qǐng)你就與人交往(communicating with others)的話題向《21世紀(jì)英語(yǔ)報(bào)》投稿。 描

述一次你解決與他人交往困境的經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?/p>

提示詞語(yǔ)：experience; get on well; help; talk; by oneself; understand; respect; share; enjoy

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

In our life, we communicate with others every day. It’s important to get on well with each other. However, it’s not an easy thing.

Once, two of my classmates and I were working on a wall

newspaper. I thought I had a great idea but they didn’t use it. I was sad and decided never to talk to them. But after giving it a second thought, I talked to them, telling them about my feelings and how I wished they could use my idea. They apologized to me sincerely and explained to me the reason. We got to understand each other and came up with a better idea which made the wall newspaper eye-catching.

From the experience, I know how important it is to have a

heart-to-heart talk, especially when having problems. If we try to understand each other more, we will enjoy a better relationship and more happiness.

【解析】

試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作首先引出寫(xiě)作的主題，說(shuō)明在交流過(guò)程中也會(huì)遇到一些困難的事情，并非易事However, it’s not an easy thing.然后再說(shuō)明自己一次的經(jīng)歷并說(shuō)明自己剛開(kāi)始如何處理的，后由于自己的努力最終問(wèn)題解決了，從這個(gè)角度來(lái)說(shuō)明溝通的重要性，最后，從這次經(jīng)歷中總結(jié)自己的觀點(diǎn)，說(shuō)明當(dāng)發(fā)生矛盾時(shí)要多進(jìn)行心對(duì)心的交流，才能有更好的關(guān)系especially when having problems. If we try to understand each other more, we will enjoy a better relationship and more happiness.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文的寫(xiě)作要抓住要點(diǎn)，對(duì)該所選的的相關(guān)內(nèi)容都要描寫(xiě)到。初三的作文著重考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力，要在“準(zhǔn)”字上下功夫。在寫(xiě)作中注意人稱與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫(xiě)的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫(xiě)，考試時(shí)就能寫(xiě)出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文。