Question

假如你是Tommy，你的朋友Jack給你來信，抱怨他的父母對他管得太嚴(yán)格了，請你結(jié)合自己家庭的情況，給他寫一封回信，讓Jack明白每個家庭都有家規(guī)，家規(guī)其實是父母對子女的愛護(hù)。
寫作提示：
你家里有哪些家規(guī)（至少三點(diǎn)）。
你對這些家規(guī)的看法。
你對Jack 的建議。
要求：1. 必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 詞數(shù)：80左右（文章的開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）；
3. 不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。
Dear Jack,
In your last letter you complained that your parents were too strict with you. Actually every family has its rules
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Yours,
Tommy

Answer 1

Dear Jack,
In your last letter you complained that your parents were too strict with you. Actually every family has its rules. So does mine. Let me tell you some rules of my family.
First, my parents stop me from watching TV on weekdays. It allow me have more time to do with my study as well as to do some outdoor activities. Second, they only allow me to play computer games for two hours at weekends. I agree that playing too much computer games is bad for us because we are easily addicted to it .Third, they ask me to do some housework at home, such as cleaning the floor, washing dishes after meals. In fact I agree that it is good to share housework with our parents and I enjoy doing housework. 
I think you could discuss your family rules with your parents and make the family rules together with them. As the saying goes: nothing can be accomplished without norms and standards. As a child, we should obey the rules in schools as well as at home. I believe that the rules will lead us to have a healthy and meaningful life.
Yours,
Tommy

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封回信。本題給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，確定寫作內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和將來時態(tài)，寫作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
點(diǎn)評：注意寫作中的時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。