Question

閱讀完以上短文，你想起我們每年歡度的春節嗎？哪年的春節令你印象深刻難忘？請你寫一篇題為“My unforgettable Chinese New Year ”的短文，內容包括：
你何時度過難忘的春節？
你當時在哪里，與誰一起度過，做了哪些事情？
希望每年的春節都過得開心。
要求：1.短文結構完整，意思連貫，語言流暢，語法準確，符合邏輯；
2. 80詞左右；不得在文中出現學校和學生的真實姓名。
My unforgettable Chinese New Year
Chinese New Year is the most important festival for all of us.                           
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               

Answer 1

Chinese New Year is the most important festival for all of us. When I was nine years old, I went to my hometown---Chaoyang with my parents for the Sprint festival. I was so impressed. On the first day, I got up early and wore my new clothes . My parents , grandpa and grandma gave me red envelopes . I felt so happy . Then we bought some gifts to visit my aunt, uncle and other relatives. We got toghter and had a big meal.
At night, I lighted a lot of firecrackers with my friends. To begin with, I didn’t know what to do . Luckily, a boy called XiaoGang helped me a lot. At last, the whole sky was bright. How beautiful it was.
I hope I will be happy in every Chinese NewYear.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹三方面的內容，你何時度過難忘的春節？你當時在哪里，與誰一起度過，做了哪些事情？希望每年的春節都過得開心。根據敘述的事件，可知應該用過去時態，主要應用第一人稱。
【亮點說明】這篇短文在寫作時注意到了時態的變化而且使用了大量的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。. On the first day,Then, At last,表示時間順序的短語的應用使文章的表達更富有條理。