Question

英語課堂上，老師要求學生就“與人相處”的話題展開小組討論。請根據以下你所在小組的討論結果，以“how to get well with others” 為題，寫一篇英語短文。

Suggestions	Learn to share(分享) Respect(尊重) others Communicate with each other ……
My suggestions	……

注意：1.詞數80--100；
2.可適當發揮，以使行文連貫；
3.文中請勿提及你的真實姓名和學校。
How to get on well with others
                                                                                         
            

Answer 1

How to get on well with others
How to Get on Well with Others? Our class had a discussion about how to get on well with others in an English     lesson last week.We all gave our suggestions.First, we should learn to share.We should share our happiness as well as sadness with others. Second,We should respect others.That is very important.Only when we respect others can we gain respect from them.Third,communicate with others.Communication can get away the misunderstanding between the people.
In my opinion,besides the suggestions above,we should get ready to help and show our love and care to them when they are in trouble.In addition,be kind and friendly.Always keep a smile on your face when talking with others

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第一人稱，注意時態語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: get on well with others和其他人相處得好；learn to share 學會分享；communicate with others與他人交流。we should get ready to help and show our love and care to them when they are in trouble.當他身處困境的時候，我們應準備幫助并給他們我們的愛和關心。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.