Question

根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)提示，用英語寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
Peter和父母呆在香港已有兩天了。
昨天，他們前往迪士尼樂園（Disneyland）。那是一個(gè)著名的主題公園。
在入口處他們一起合影。下午晚些時(shí)候，迪士尼人物大游行開始了。
表演者們都穿著不同的服裝，邊行進(jìn)邊向他們揮手致意。
他們在那兒逗留了約八個(gè)小時(shí)， 玩得高興。
Peter的感受（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮1--2句）
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Answer 1

Li Lei and his parents have been in Hong Kong for two days. Yesterday they went to Disneyland. That is a famous theme park. At the entrance they took photos together. A parade of Disney characters began later in the afternoon. The performers all wore different costumes and waved to people while they marched across the park. They stayed there for about eight hours and had fun. Li Lei thinks Disneyland is beautiful and he will never forget this meaningful experience.

這是一篇給材料作文，所給材料非常詳細(xì)，并具有一定的邏輯關(guān)系�；�本上按照材料內(nèi)容翻譯即可，注意文后表達(dá)彼得的感受。在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般過去及完成時(shí)態(tài)，主語是單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。