Question

書面表達。

     假設你有一個非常要好的朋友叫Tom，他與你同班了三年，很快就要隨父母回國了。
請你根據以下提示，介紹你的這位朋友。
          
要求：1．以上所有提示必須用上，可適當發揮； 
          2．文中不得出現真實的人名和校名； 
          3．針對他的不足，提出你的建議，不少于兩條；
          4．80詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

                                             My good friend Tom
     Tom is my good friend who came to China three years ago. ________________
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Answer 1

One possible version:
                                                       My good friend Tom
     Tom is my good friend who came to China three years ago. He will go back to Canada with his parents
soon. Tom is tall and strong. He plays football very well and was in our school football team last term. He
wears glasses because of his poor eyesight. Tom is easy-going and creative. He was once the good host of
our school English Corner. Tom has some shortcomings. He likes eating a lot of snacks. I think it's not good
for his health. I will advise him to shop doing that. He often spends too much money but I think he'd better
not. As students, we don't make money. We should have the habit of saving money.