Question

請你根據提示內容，向別人介紹一下上個星期天你和朋友去公園游玩的情況，寫一篇60詞左右的短文。
1. 公園離你家有5公里遠，騎自行車去的
2. 呼吸了新鮮空氣（breathe, fresh）；觀看了動物表演；去餐館吃了哪些食物
3. 是美好的一天；很高興
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Answer 1

Last Sunday. I went to the park with my friends. It was a sunny day. The park was five kilometers from my home. So we went there by bike. There were a lot of trees in the park. The air was fresh. I enjoyed it. Then I saw an animal show. It was very interesting. In the afternoon , I was a little hungry. So we went to a restaurant. We ate some delicious food like noodles, dumplings. Later we went home. I was very happy. It was my favourite trip.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。題目中給出的材料較為詳細，我們只要將這些內容正確表達出來即可。動筆前應根據材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態，句式，關鍵單詞等問題。結合材料可知本文主要是第一人稱，時態位一般過去時態。為了是表達更有邏輯性，可以使用序數詞，連接詞等。
點評：此類作為首先要做的就是認真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數。另外為了應付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應考時就會有法可依。