Question

我們要有一個燦爛的未來。今天就要不懈的努力，緊張而忙碌的學習生活使我們更加充實，根據下表提示以My Day為題，寫一篇60個詞左右的短文，可適當發揮，至少用英語表達3個時間。

6:30 a.m.	get up
6:45 a.m.	breakfast
7:00 a.m.	go to school
7:30 a.m.	read English
5:50 p.m.	go home
6:15 p.m.	have dinner
7:20 p.m.	do homework
10:30 p.m.	go to bed（睡覺）

                                                      
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           

Answer 1

One possible version:
My Day
Everybody wants to have a wonderful future. It repures great effort. Busy school life makes my day full.
I have a regular living habit. Every day, I get up at half past six and have breakfast after fifteen minutes.I go to school at seven o'clock to begin my school day.To improve our spoken English,we read English at half past seven. At ten to six, I finish my busy school work and go back home. Our family usually have dinner at a quarter past six. After dinner,we often play games until twenty past seven.Then, I do my homework. I go to bed at 10:30 Pm。
This is my day.

試題分析：本題是一篇話題作文，需要介紹你的一天的生活。具體時間和內容，題中已經給出表格。需要把時間表轉換成自己的一天的描述。文章不能一味的用同一句式來進行描寫一天的進程，要有所改變，避免重復乏味。另外，本題重點考查的是時間表達的使用。通常可以用介詞past 和to來表達。15分鐘可以用a quarter。文章語意要連貫。
【亮點說明】例文全文內容連貫，上下銜接自然，在描述自己一天的過程的同時，開頭進行了評價，使全文有了中心主題，而不是簡單的流水賬。另外，例文不是一味地簡單描述各個時間段的內容，句式結構進行了變化。比如 Every day, I get up at half past six and have breakfast after fifteen minutes. 巧妙地把兩個時間點連貫起來。例文除了完全描述題中所給內容之外，還進行了適當發揮。