Question

假設(shè)Film Guide外文版將刊登文章介紹電影“爸爸去哪兒”(Dad, Where Are We Going?)，上周五你看過了。請據(jù)此寫一篇100詞左右的英文觀后感。內(nèi)容提示如下：
1. 電影講述5個明星爸爸（star father）和他們的孩子的故事，深受學(xué)生喜愛；
2. 這次是去動物園，孩子們和爸爸一起親自制作美食，欣賞美景，彼此間有了很好的交流；
3. 爸爸們以前沒有時間陪孩子，現(xiàn)在已學(xué)會如何悉心照顧孩子；
4. 觀后感想。（自擬兩點）
注意：
1. 觀后感須包括所給內(nèi)容要點，要點語句通順、意思連貫；
2. 第4要點的內(nèi)容須用2-3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3. 觀后感的開頭已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
The film Dad, Where Are We Going? is one of this year’s hottest films. I saw it last Friday. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

The film Dad, Where Are We Going? is one of this year’s hottest TV films. I saw it last Friday. It tells the story about five star fathers and their children. It is popular among people of all ages and many students like watch it. Five star fathers and their children take the trip to the zoo. There they made delicious food by themselves and enjoy beautiful views together. In this way they can communicate with each other well. Before fathers had no time for children. Now they have learned how to take good care of their children. I think this TV program is very meaningful. We should be brave to deal with problems.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇英文觀后感。本文所給材料比較詳細，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。