Question

你覺得你的校園生活安全嗎？請你以“How to Keep Safe in School”為題寫一篇短文，談談你的看法。
內容包括：
描述一件發生在你身上或你看到的發生在校園里的意外事件（經過與結果）
提出解決這種校園意外事件的建議（至少兩條）
呼吁每個學生要注意校園安全
作文要求：
1．不得在作文中出現學校真實的名稱和學生真實姓名。如需使用學校名稱或學生的姓名，請一律使用Hill School和Tom。
2．語句連貫，詞數80個左右。作文開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數.
How to Keep Safe in School
Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example,

Answer 1

How to Keep Safe in School
Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. So, he had to stay in hospital for two weeks.
So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways. And the teachers had better keep an eye on the students after class and stop them from running.
At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，所給材料要點突出，要求明確。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些要點表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。寫作時要注意人稱、時態的轉換及主謂一致問題。同時注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內容，文章組織結構合理，層次鮮明，句式多樣。同時，文章中使用了一些的固定句式和短語，如： run after each other 、 fall down、because of 、had better do sth、keep an eye on、 stop sb from doing sth 、pay attention to等，這為文章增色不少。在學習中注意總結積累，熟練掌握一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。