Question

在一堂英語(yǔ)課上，老師組織全班同學(xué)開(kāi)展有關(guān)“個(gè)人愛(ài)好”的討論。假如以下是你所在小組的記錄, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)這個(gè)記錄用英語(yǔ)向全班做一個(gè)匯報(bào)。

Name	Hobby
Wu Jun	Collecting stamps
Jia Mei	Traveling
Wang Peng	Listening to the rock music
I	...

提示：1. 匯報(bào)內(nèi)容：小組每個(gè)人的愛(ài)好及你對(duì)愛(ài)好的看法。

2. 不少于60詞。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear class,

Good morning! Now let me report the discussion in our group.

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That’s all. Thank you for listening.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear class,

Good morning! Now let me report the discussion in our group.

Wu Jun likes collecting stamps. Jia Mei is interested in traveling very much. Wang Peng is fond of listening to the music. And I enjoy reading books and swimming.

I think these hobbies are good for our health and life. They can make us happy. They can also help us relax after daily work and study. When we are ill, hobbies can help us get well soon.

That’s all. Thank you for listening.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文,要求把一次關(guān)于個(gè)人愛(ài)好問(wèn)題的討論會(huì)做一個(gè)匯報(bào).本題所給材料比較簡(jiǎn)潔,所以需要自己根據(jù)要點(diǎn)組織語(yǔ)言,表達(dá)出材料中體現(xiàn)的觀點(diǎn). 寫(xiě)作中注意將同學(xué)們的各自愛(ài)好介紹清楚，并談?wù)勛约旱南敕ǎ�不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作中注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

考點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。