Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇以“To protect forests”為題的的作文。森林對(duì)人類(lèi)很重要。它們能幫助凈化空氣，涵養(yǎng)水源，調(diào)節(jié)氣候等。沒(méi)有了森林，……。但現(xiàn)在森林面積越來(lái)越小。我們應(yīng)該如何做來(lái)保護(hù)森林。
要求字?jǐn)?shù)在70—90字左右。
To protect forests

Answer 1

To protect forests
Forests are very important to people. The plants in the forests help to make the air fresher and cleaner. They can hold the water when it rains. They can also help to control the climate. They give us many useful things. But now Forests are becoming smaller and smaller. So how can we protect them? First, we shouldn’t cut down the trees. Second, we should save the use of paper. Last, we should plant more trees. Forests are our good friends. We should protect them.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如. The plants in the forests help to make the air fresher and cleaner.；They give us many useful things.還運(yùn)用了if，while，that引導(dǎo)的從句；并注意了句子的銜接如：So；First；Second, Last,等等。層次分明，表達(dá)流暢。