Question

書面表達（共10分）
為了使同學們之間相處得更加融洽，并且能夠更好地適應社會，你校學生會正在舉辦以“how to behave well”為主題的英語征文比賽，請你寫一篇英語短文談談你的看法。
要點：1.守時、有禮貌、誠實、公正；
2.友好待人，樂于助人；
3. ……
要求：1.用上所給要點，并適當補充。
2.文中不得出現真實的人名、校名、地址等相關信息。
3. 80個單詞左右。
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

One possible version：
What should we teenagers do to get on well with everything and everyone else? Here is what we should do and shouldn’t be allowed to do.
As a good student, we must be on time and honest. And we should be polite and fair to everyone. Also, we should be kind and friendly to others. We should be ready to help people in trouble. Then we can get the same help from others. Besides these, we should obey traffic rules to keep safe. But we shouldn’t make noise in public. We shouldn’t drop litter everywhere, either.
It is not easy to behave well in daily life. However, everything will be OK if we try our best.

試題分析：本篇書面表達應根據提綱內容談談表現得更好。在寫作時，應該注意文章結構與文章層次。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，準確運用時態。文章銜接連貫，運用了as a good student, and, also, then, besides,but等連詞進行銜接。同時，本文中運用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:on time, be fair to , in public, drop litter everywhere等。文章結構清楚，第一段引出話題，第二段詳細表達觀點，第三段總結。