Question

Lisa和 Nelly是一對好姐妹，Lisa比Nelly大2歲。寫一寫她們的相同點(diǎn)與不同點(diǎn)。
相同點(diǎn)：長相一樣，都喜歡踢足球，學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，她們都喜歡數(shù)學(xué)，認(rèn)為數(shù)學(xué)很有用處而且很有趣。都害怕小動物，喜歡花朵和植物。
不同點(diǎn)：Lisa活潑外向，喜歡音樂和體育。Nelly安靜，擅長英語跟語文。
要求：80個詞左右，字跡工整。

Answer 1

Lisa and Nelly are good friends. Lisa is two years older than Nelly. And they look like the same. They like playing soccer. Both of them study hard. They both like math, and they think it is useful and interesting. But they are afraid of small animals. They like flowers and plants.
But Lisa is more outgoing and likes music and sports. But Nelly is a little quiter. She is good at Chinese and English.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。主要寫Lisa and Nelly的相同點(diǎn)與不同點(diǎn)。全文以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如look the same,like playing,both of them,be afraid of,be good at等短語；賓語從句，如 hey think it is useful and interesting。文章整體內(nèi)容飽滿，條理清晰，表達(dá)流暢。