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據報道，中學生的身體素質有所下降。這一情況已經引起全社會的關注和教育部門的高度重視。下圖是某中學關于青少年體育鍛煉的宣傳標語。
請你根據下面的要點和要求，用英語寫一篇短文，80詞左右。
要點：1.鍛煉身體的好處：strong，healthy，energetic，
2.鍛煉身體的方式：ballgames，running，swimming，．．．
3.請你談談對學校開展體育鍛煉的看法或建議。(至少寫兩點)
要求：1.內容必須包括以上要點，可適當發揮。
2.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
3.語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。
4.文中不得出現真實校名及姓名。
EXERCISE ONE HOLR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY!

Answer 1

Health is very important to us teenagers.Either study or work is based on strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic. If we don't take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as the slogan says, "Exercise one hour a day, keep illness away. "
There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and ball games.
Now we students have to do too much homework after school. I hope teachers will leave us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports.  I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us.

解析試題分析：本文的寫作，首先將題目審清�？梢詮腻憻捝眢w的重要性著手，說明鍛煉身體的好處能夠幫助我們更健康，學習生活更富活力；其次，介紹幾種鍛煉的方式，如跑步、游泳等；最后，對學校的體育鍛煉提出看法或建議，可以說少布置作業，多安排體育賽事等方面進行寫作。
考點：提綱類寫作
點評：初中英語的作文，著重考察學生連詞成句的能力，要在“準”字上下功夫。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數關系和動詞時態等諸多方面。對于中考的作文，盡量將所學的知識運用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結構緊湊的文章，不要出現中式英文。在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進行默寫，考試時就能寫出準確地道的作文。