Question

最近的一項研究調查表明，大約20%的學生有不吃早飯的習慣。請根據下列表格內容提示用英語寫一篇短文。

原   因	1. 晚上學習太晚，想多睡一會兒而不吃早飯；
2. 家長太忙無法照顧，直接給錢讓孩子自己解決；
3. 一些男生把錢拿去玩游戲，一些女生想保持苗條不吃早飯。
后   果	1. 上課無精打采，成績下降；
2. 身體越來越差……
你的建議	？（至少寫出一條建議并說明原因）

     注意：詞數80詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）

     A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast. That’s because 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

    A survey shows that about 20％of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast. That’s because they stay up too late to study and they want to sleep more instead of having breakfast. Also their parents are too busy to look after them and so they just give some money to their children to buy food themselves. But some boys use the money to play computer games and some girls just want to keep slim without having breakfast. As a result, some students have no energy in class. They have worse and worse grades and they are unhealthier and unhealthier. I think good breakfast can give us enough energy for the whole day’s study and sport. So we should have breakfast every day.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文主要寫一些學生不吃早飯的原因，為什么要吃早飯，全文主要用一般現在時態。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如stay up，instead of，look after ， too... To...,look after ，as a result，in class，worse and worse ， unhealthier and unhealthier 等短語；賓語從句如A survey shows that about 20％of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast， I think good breakfast can give us enough energy for the whole day’s study and sport..；表語從句如That’s because they stay up too late to study and they want to sleep more instead of having breakfast。文章層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。

考點：提綱作文。