Question

書面表達（10分）
假如你是李華。這學期，你們班換了一個新英語老師（Miss Yan）。她年輕熱情，有很多優點。但是今天在課堂上她卻讓大家給她提出意見。于是大家紛紛發言，這不，還真提出了不少意見呢！請你根據下面的提示，給嚴老師寫一封信，委婉地給她提些建議。80個單詞左右。
1.說話語速太快。
2.作業有點兒多。
3.有點兒嚴肅。
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Answer 1

Dear Miss Yan,
I am glad to have a chance to write a letter to you. I like you very much because your classes are so interesting. But I want to give you some advice. First, you speak too quickly in class. Would you mind speaking more slowly? Then we can understand you better. Second, would you mind not giving us too much homework every day? If we spend too much time on homework, we won’t have time to relax ourselves. Last, I feel you are a little strict. I am a little afraid of you. Of course, you can still be strict with us in class, but after class we sould be friends, don’t you think so?

本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達，寫作的話題為給新老師提出建議。具體內容包括建議信的格式，建議的內容包括老師說話語速太快，作業有點兒多，有點兒嚴肅，在寫作時應注意使用委婉的語句，同時應注意語言的準確性和連貫性。