Question

書面表達（共20分）

Answer 1

 
My hometowm
There used to be many factories in my hometown. The workers often put the waste into the rivers. So the rivers were very dirty and many fish died.
Luckily, our government realized the problem and took action. Many factories moved away. The air is fresh and the rivers are clean again. People can swim in the rivers. Now my hometown has turned into a modern town. There are many places of interest and a lot of tourists come to my hometown every year.
Now people are enjoying a comfortable life.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第一人稱，注意時態語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文進行了較為全面的說明，能用簡短的詞匯表達出提綱的內容，并且進行了適當的處理，準確的添加自己的觀點，同時使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。