Question

書面表達 (滿分10分)
假設你叫李俊，你的美國朋友David想要在中國結交更多的朋友。你通過電子郵件，把你的同學王明介紹給他。王明情況見下表：

性別	男
年齡	14
外貌	方臉，大眼睛，短發，高個子；
個性	很有幽默感，替朋友保守秘密，從不說他人壞話；
愛好	喜歡動物，在家養了一些寵物；
理想	當一名校長 (headmaster)，讓學生有更多的時間娛樂；
春節計劃	到美國旅游，參觀美國白宮。

 要求：1. 注意文章條理，語句通順；2. 詞數80左右，郵件的開頭和結尾已給出，不
計入總詞數。
Dear David,
How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you.
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I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible. Maybe you can show him around your country at the Spring Festival.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Jun

Answer 1

Dear David,
How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you.
He is a 14-year-old boy. He has a square face, big eyes and short hair. He is tall. He has a good sense of humour. He keeps secrets for his friends and never says bad words about others.
He loves animals. He keeps some pets at home.
He wants to be a headmaster when he grows up. He hopes to make his students have more time for fun.
He is planning to have a trip to America and visit the White House at the Spring Festival.
I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible. Maybe you can show him around your country at the Spring Festival.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Jun

試題分析：這是一篇應用文寫作，首先，要注意格式，要有標題、落款，根據題目要求用準確的詞表達出來，特別注意對不會的表達進行替換，展開來說，同時將文章寫成經典的“三段式”文章，使用自己積累的高級詞匯，作文模板，起承轉合的詞，將文章寫出水平。
點評：對于應用文寫作要簡潔明了，直入主題，平時學習時多進行作文模板的記憶，萬能句型的積累，在寫作之前，首先對題目進行認真的審清，并在腦海中回想自己積累的哪些句式、句型、單詞能用進來，這些單詞、句型都應是經典的，不會錯的。英語文字不宜寫的太小，所有字母都頂橫線寫好，看起來卷面整潔，寫錯的地方只需輕輕劃一筆就行，切不可反復涂黑。